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[Undertale] True Determination CHAPTER 11

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Chapter 11

SCORE: Burn In Despair www.youtube.com/watch?v=34_hLQ…

Frisk: *Feels their True Determination weaken* (This...this can't be happening...) *Grits teeth* How could you...?!

Chara: Hmm?

Frisk: How could you hurt all those innocent people?! Don't you feel any shame?! Any remorse?! You never stopped to think about how THEY would feel?! The pain they feel when you hurt not only them but their loved ones too?! HOW CAN YOU BE SO CRUEL!!!

Sans: G A S T E R B L A S T E R!!! *Several beams fire at Chara from all directions and rotate in a circle*

Chara: HEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *Dodges the wave of beams* I TOLD YOU BEFORE! *Appears behind Frisk and whispers to them* I'm just. having. fun! *Takes knife and strikes Frisk directly in the heart*

Frisk:..........!!!! *Feels the blade trying to sever their heart* Aah-!

Chara: Fall into despair! Your SOUL is MINE!!!

Sans:.........!!!

Toriel:........!!!

"Frisk...."

Frisk:....Ngh....huh?

"Frisk, you can't give up! Come on! You're the most determined person I know! You were just like my friend! My friend never gave up and neither should you because like them...you're my hero!"

Frisk:......A-As...riel....I...I...

"Wow, was I really ever this bad?"

Frisk:...!!!!!

..........Another voice spoke along with Asriel's. This voice...is Frisk's Determination.

SCORE: Hopes and Dreams www.youtube.com/watch?v=tz82xb…

"Don't believe the lies of a demon. I DO love them all! I wouldn't do all that! You know the truth. And so do our friends!"

Frisk: *Gasps* ...!!!

"Keep up your Determination, Frisk! I gave it to you...so please...use it! You can SAVE everyone we love! Don't let this bully pick on you or your family! You can win!"

Frisk: (You...you sound like me...who are you?!)

"Heheh... I'm just a friend who loves to have fun!"

Chara: Huh?! *Sees Frisk's hands holding back the strike*

Frisk: *Feels their True Determination returning* I... *Looks back up and glares at Chara* I..won't...let you...HURT MY FRIENDS!!! *Struggles against Chara and gets the knife away from them*

Chara: WHAT?! *Gets disarmed and loses the knife* AAGH!!!

Sans: Whoa!

Frisk: *Is holding the knife and throws it up* SANS! DESTROY THE KNIFE!!!

Sans: Huh?! 'Kay! *Fires a beam at the knife and destroys it*

Chara: HEY!!! WHY YOU!

Frisk: You can't kill anyone so easily without that knife, can you?! And that means I have more time to do THIS! *Opens up the Commands and sees the ACT command replaced with the SAVE command* We keep saving each other... This...is what true love is! We're more than just friends! We're family! *Has a second Human child's apparition appear by them*

The second voice speaks in unison with Frisk.

Chara: Wait...that...that can't be!

Toriel: That's...

Asgore: Chara...OUR Chara! So Asriel's friend lives...

Frisk: I don't know about the "glimmer of hope" part, but I DO know that I love all of them and I would NEVER do those horrible things to them! *Points to the memories of Chara’s kills* Maybe you did in YOUR SAVE FILE, but I didn't! I never killed anyone in my life and I'm NOT STARTING NOW!!! *The bad memories begin to lose focus and Sans blasts every one of them as they glow yellow*

Sans:...!!! *Nods* Heh... So the kid's figured it out! Good, I hate explaining stuff.

Frisk: Asriel was good! He wanted nothing but harmony and peace with his family and his best friend! Asgore! Toriel! He never stopped hoping for that! That’s what gave everyone in the Underground hope!

Toriel: Asriel... *Snaps out of it* Frisk! *Smiles* You’re…absolutely right! Asriel really was a good boy!

Asgore: *Nods with a sad smile* Hmm... Indeed. He never stopped hoping… Well put, child!

In spirit, Asriel smiles and nods with tears in his eyes.

Frisk: I promised that I would stay on the straight and narrow and that I would never stop loving you all and that I would always take care of you! *Sans gives a thumbs up and wink* ALL OF YOU! Papyrus!

Papyrus: Huh?!

Frisk: You and I will ALWAYS be friends!

Sans: Listen to 'em, bro! The kid's got the heart to say it!

Papyrus: Human... Frisk... You are right! OF COURSE WE ARE!!! YOU WOULD NEVER BETRAY YOUR BEST FRIEND, THE GREAT PAPYRUS!!! NYEH HEH HEH HEH HEH HEEEEH!!!!

Frisk: Undyne, even though you thought of me as an enemy before, we accepted each other! And became great friends too! It was thanks to Papyrus that we could!

Undyne:.....Yeah...we sure did, didn't we?

Frisk: And besides, you're one of the strongest people I know! You don't have to take anything Chara says seriously! There's no way you're weak!

Undyne: *Smirks* Heh! HYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! YOU GOT THAT RIGHT, KID!

Frisk: Alphys, Metatton... Remember when we supported each other?! Back in Hotlands and The Core?! That was actually a lot of fun! We put on a show for everyone to enjoy! We all did our best and made each other happy! "Pathetic Junk" doesn't make people happy! You guys do! So you made some mistakes here and there, everyone does! At least you still have a guilty conscience you listen to! As long as you have that in your hearts, that's enough to warrant forgiveness!

Alphys: *Tearing up and smiling* Frisk! Thank you!

Metatton: *Stabilizes and blushes* Oh, stop! You just make me want to eat you up, darling!

Chara: Oh no you don't! *Rushes at Frisk to attack, but gets stopped by Sans' telekinesis and thrown back* AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!

Sans: It's rude ta cut in!

Frisk: And Sans... I'm never going back on that promise! You'll never have to worry about me becoming that evil Chara! I'll always be Frisk! And I'm never going to Reset!
(The thought of your family coming together to fight by your side fills you with determination!)
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My heart...it breaks.